tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post7724765503241789764..comments2024-03-18T22:39:09.069-07:00Comments on Jenny Matlock: Story Time Tuesday - Writing Fiction - Chapter FourJennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-77516483503371058272010-10-03T18:58:12.393-07:002010-10-03T18:58:12.393-07:00Oh, I can relate to these days....grief, depressio...Oh, I can relate to these days....grief, depression, melancholy...<br /><br />You did an awesome job depicting the process. I hope she is able to get it together enough to begin. Then she can rant and cry and worry out some of her emotions-and see the progress.<br /><br />I wish I'd known about blogger years ago!The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-76716144540147646992010-10-03T05:42:59.389-07:002010-10-03T05:42:59.389-07:00Oh Pearl you are not pathetic, you are perfect, ri...Oh Pearl you are not pathetic, you are perfect, right where you are supposed to be in this pathetic world. I do hope you continue to keep going, it is so hard...so hard.Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-46965372390089392122010-09-30T03:57:57.452-07:002010-09-30T03:57:57.452-07:00You know how people will say, "You're mag...You know how people will say, "You're magic" and it's really only a "How are ya?"<br /><br />Well, you really are magic and I mean it in the honest-to-goodness, presto change-o way.<br /><br />This gets better and better.People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-58590052969129010662010-09-29T15:51:43.959-07:002010-09-29T15:51:43.959-07:00All right! That was an awesome chapter. I could ...All right! That was an awesome chapter. I could feel her anger as I read and her sorrow as well.Louriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05477223472789865063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-40476174984884512802010-09-29T12:33:24.109-07:002010-09-29T12:33:24.109-07:00I finally made it here without interruption to rea...I finally made it here without interruption to read another wonderful chapter of your story. You capture emotions beautifully with words. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter. HugsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-20246006248198807882010-09-28T15:00:43.851-07:002010-09-28T15:00:43.851-07:00So many powerful emotions all jumbled up and takin...So many powerful emotions all jumbled up and taking her by surprise. Very real. Nicely captured.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13357761230206692089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-54987244761888832492010-09-28T12:53:14.295-07:002010-09-28T12:53:14.295-07:00Loveing Pearl. Hope it works out for her.Loveing Pearl. Hope it works out for her.Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03615619898193867797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-39189851581759670332010-09-28T11:56:05.358-07:002010-09-28T11:56:05.358-07:00I love what Pearl is learning from the blogging wo...I love what Pearl is learning from the blogging world, and I am sure there is more learning to come. Great chapter.Mrs. Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11391375043884291230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-85390746549727926812010-09-28T10:51:05.136-07:002010-09-28T10:51:05.136-07:00I really like you this isn't "clean"...I really like you this isn't "clean"---by that I mean, she's angry, she's sad, she's depressed. In short, she's grieving. It's a fallacy that each stage of grief lines up neatly, and I think you capture that so well. <br /><br />Love this. Will be there every Tuesday.Nancy Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-51531837134539124982010-09-28T10:37:51.157-07:002010-09-28T10:37:51.157-07:00And just last night I was thinking about poor Pear...And just last night I was thinking about poor Pearl and wanting so much to read more of her story. Thank you for obliging my craving. And the poor girl! I love the bags under her eyes packed and ready for a three month trip to Europe. So great!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09670661525139676900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-3998360625259414372010-09-28T08:30:05.659-07:002010-09-28T08:30:05.659-07:00If this were already a book, I'd be reading it...If this were already a book, I'd be reading it all day until I was finished. In my pajamas.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-70073861298140398012010-09-28T05:48:42.511-07:002010-09-28T05:48:42.511-07:00Sounds to me like Pearl is starting to move on.......Sounds to me like Pearl is starting to move on....getting to anger is a big step.Jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04810126999695733332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-17285440869053163532010-09-28T05:15:27.039-07:002010-09-28T05:15:27.039-07:00This was good. A woman in the throes of grief, st...This was good. A woman in the throes of grief, still figuring it out. I hope the blog helps her.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-10320179273909771262010-09-28T04:22:32.979-07:002010-09-28T04:22:32.979-07:00I love this! I will be reading the past chapters l...I love this! I will be reading the past chapters later today! <br /><br />I saw a bit of myself in there!<br /><br />Thanks!noexcuseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14149834972952594159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7688526164999265223.post-68020274470446959922010-09-28T03:27:09.264-07:002010-09-28T03:27:09.264-07:00Another great chapter! Also, reminds me I should g...Another great chapter! Also, reminds me I should get Dave to put that doorknob back on that came off, 'cause you never know...Julie Kwiatkowski Schulerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00292349838507731268noreply@blogger.com