Sunday, June 13, 2010

Saturday Centus - Week 6

This post is linked Saturday Centus - A 100 word story based on a prompt. The prompt is in bold below.
*********************************************************************************
WEEK 6 PROMPT

It’s true, the smell of freshly mowed grass can stay with you for years, for decades.


And it's also true that the evocative scent can bring on a full-blown attack of acridophobia.

Especially if you were the tomboy in a family of four girls to whom the duty of mowing the front, 3 acre field fell to on a weekly basis.

"Dad," I would beg, "Please don't make me mow behind the polebarn. The grasshoppers are everywhere there! I hate them!"

My Father, a no-nonsense military man, simply growled, "Quit being stupid. Go mow!"

So I did.

The rich verdant smell of the grass falling under the whirring blades of the riding lawn mower was always accompanied by my screams and flailing arms as the grasshoppers rained around me like evil, prehistoric confetti in the golden summer sun.

Click here to read the rest
of the stories linked to Week 6's prompt!

post signature

16 comments:

  1. "evil, prehistoric confetti" I liked these words so much. Very unusual but very appropriate when I think of grasshoppers hopping all around you, ha. Great Centus.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Sweet memories! Freshly cut grass makes me want watermelon:) Now sure why! HUGS!

    ReplyDelete
  3. You do have a way with words, Jenny! I'll never be able to look at a grasshopper again without laughing hysterically. DH is going to think that this time I really HAVE gone off the deep end :) Kathy

    ReplyDelete
  4. EEEKKKK I hate em too Jenny! Confetti is too nice of a word to describe the little creeps. I can think of bolder words...bet you have too :)

    Fun post for the Centus.

    ReplyDelete
  5. You are SUCH a girl! Brilliantly done.

    ReplyDelete
  6. "evil, prehistoric confetti" i dont know whether to pee my pants out of fear or spew coffee over my screen in laughter ... lets just say somethings wet, im not telling you what .... and that was hysterically descriptive!!!

    ReplyDelete
  7. I am not sure whether to laugh or cry! I can't even imagine mowing with those evils floating all around me...grasshoppers can be so creepy!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  8. I think we'd all be flailing and screaming if faced by evil prehistoric confetti! Even if you like grasshoppers, they quickly lose their charm when you encounter large numbers.

    And you threw this guy an 80th birthday party? Oy.


    Excellent job, Matlock!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Excellent and so vivid. I hate the sudeen jumping attack of a grasshopper!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Awww, you're such a girl! LOL! Great job on this week's Centus, Jenny! That was a fun read!

    ReplyDelete
  11. That'll make me think twice before mowing!

    Pat
    www.critteralley.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete
  12. EWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Good description!

    ReplyDelete
  13. Ummmm, what's a polebarn? Off to check.

    ReplyDelete

Hi! Thanks for leaving a comment! My handy dandy e-mail assistant always notifies me when you do and I read every single one.

I try to respond to comments with a return e-mail BUT I just noticed that I've been answering a lot of them to blogs that haven't linked their e-mail address to their Google account! I haven't been ignoring your comments, but now I know you aren't getting my reply e-mails! I'm sorry!

I know a lot of other bloggers who respond to comments via e-mail so if you haven't left off your e-mail on purpose, you might want to add it on! If you don't know how you can let me know in your comment and I'll see if I can help you!

Thanks so much for reading my 'Tangents'! Your comments always feel like a hug!

Jenny Matlock