Friday, October 28, 2011

How To Plant a Story Seed

This little poem is linked to week 77 of Saturday Centus. The prompt is in bold. To read other little stories, just click here.




I clasped my hands loosely
Ah loosely…just so
It’s so hard not to clench them too tight
And I shut my eyes closely
Ah closely…just so
It’s so hard to not reach toward the light
In the quiet of this moment
In the quiet of the dark
I saved all the moments
I was sure to forget
I saved all the words
Even ones not said yet
I waited and waited until words outweighed need
Then I planted a little story seed
Will it grow?
I don’t know.
But I clasp my hands loosely
Ah loosely…just so.




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10 comments:

  1. Well I'm impressed and rightly so, cause you are the queen of telling stories don't ya know.
    ♥~Ames

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  2. Love this...both your Centus and the comment from Ames!

    =)

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  3. Your story seeds are always fruitful!

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  4. What I like about visiting you is that I never know what to expect! I love this. I loved my mail today too...thank you and Happy Halloween!

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  5. Oh my goodness! A story seed is one of the very BEST kinds of seeds to plant!

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  6. Hi Jenny! Nice one (as always). I hope you are doing well...

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  7. Nicely done. Hope you're feeling better cuz we don't want you being too mean to us with the Saturday Centus this week if you're still under the weather... ;)

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  8. You planted a wonderful post sweetie.

    I just wanted to let ya know that a sweet little package arrived for Angel yesterday and a lovely little card just for me! Thanks Hon...

    I'll see that Angel get's it hopefully tomorrow! :o)

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  9. Loved this! laurie @ http://dealingwithmyinnercritic.blogspot.com/

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  10. really, i mean really wonderful post Jenny ...

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