If you're not in a mood for dark, don't read this link to week 170. Go here to read other offerings and I won't feel bad at all.
This 107 word story is inspired by this picture prompt.
We are joined at the heart…
Forever.
I watch you...
Breathing shallowly in your sterile bed…
And I wonder
and if you remember
that I remember…
that we were once joined at the heart?
Or have the dirty needles you use to forget
Made you forget
That we were once joined at the heart?
Or does it just not matter at all…
While, I.
I broke.
…and broke…
9 comments:
Wow, Jenny. What an amazing and powerful piece of work.
Amazing
The things Team Netherworld write are pretty much always dark. The Dark don't scare us!
Our teammate Helena's ex-husband was a drug addict. She will appreciate this piece.
My sweet friend, I am with you on this one!! We'll talk as soon as all my company is gone.
Love you!!
Addiction is dark. You've captured the feelings so well. You are a true wordsmith.
I really loved this, Jenny.
Deep, dark and powerful.
XOXO
Powerful piece, Jenny. And so painful.
brilliant!!!
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